Maybe this poem

Maybe this poem would be better if it were written on your lovers skin faint traces soft touches new spaces meter metered out in the span of what you can touch maybe it would ring true in the length of time between kisses and break with every catch of breath every sudden reassessment of a beautiful situation maybe this poem is best punctuated by lips and tongue and teeth and blood and sweat and other things which I blush to write about

in this poem but maybe it would be better written without pens or words or thoughts or any such conceits maybe this poems grammar is instinctual like it always has been like it never is maybe this poem shouldn't be in english but rather something universal other than lojban which is getting off track the real point being that maybe this poem is just fine the way it is but maybe its time to write a new poem together here now forever because maybe this poem has a few too many maybes, maybe.